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Thursday, 20 May 2021

hokey is on

 This term I am playing hokey you would need shin pads and a mouth guard so your teeth don't full out on the ground. There is goalkeeper defense and attack. You do NOT want to goalkeeper the ball could hit you in the head! But you do have a mask to protect your head. 19.5.21 first game  two one.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 May 2021 at 10:40

    Kio roa Kobi,I like how you did a capital at the start of the first sentence.A thing that you could change could be to add more.Zoe

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  2. Anonymous27 May 2021 at 10:53

    Hi Kobi, I like how you said what you would need if you played hockey. Next ti you should add a bit more writing. Aria

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