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Friday, 13 August 2021

fixing a bike tyre

fixing a bike tyre 



12.8.2021

Today we fixed a bike tyre/inner tube. First we needed a bike we got one it was a bmx first we needed to take off the rim from the bike. Then we took the tyre off the rim and we saw the inner tube. WE used a special tool to get the tyre off the rim. So we got one hole when really we but 15 or something we but the tyre on and pumped it up then when we where putting on the tyre and it was flat now we had to redo it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi kobi,I like your topic sentence off your paragraph.Something you could work on is to add another couple of paragraphs.This reminds me about you being so ecited.Zoe

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